I just had an excellent tutorial with Andy Stiff, course leader for MA Digital Arts Camberwell. It’s great to get such insightful feedback on my nonsite project. He had a number of good observations- most related to finding ways to enhance the spatial qualities of the project: space and time. He thought colour and image were ways to emphasize the abstract qualities of memory. I’m not sure about colour as that is complicated with hyperlinks- visited and not visited, rollovers- maybe a yellow hover bar. I need to explore that further.
He also confirmed my thoughts that it makes sense to use present tense. He had good ideas about the length of entries and shorter twitter-like entries. Good idea, I will try that.
